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Очень и очень неплохо. Багов не заметил. Стилистика неплохая. В общем дочитал до конца, а для меня это уже что-то значит.
Правда где-то посередине ты/Вы меня обломал: давно хотел почитать хорошую космическую оперу, а тут на тебе - куча старших офицеров космического флота носится по варварской планете с атрибутами фэнтези. Но все равно неплохо. Главное обосновано почему и зачем они там носятся. А последний аккорд - мол чужие-то это вампиры созданные древними вообще блеск. Если напечатают - куплю и поставлю на полку.

Вообще-то не похоже на дебют - слишком качественно. Интересно а сколько на это ушло времени? У меня так уже с полгода пылится идея да пара страниц в дальнем углу компа - а дальше ни с места...
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Спасибо за лестный отзыв!

Времени ушло, ну, полгода где-то Smile
До этого написал пару детективчиков, но когда полетел винт, решил начать нечно новое.
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Только что дочитал. Спасибо. Интересно, даже захватывает. Smile
Правда, иногда слегка чересчур рваное повествование, заметил несколько незначительных багов... А так ничего, здорово.
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... то исть как?! Crying or Very sad я в печали...
ну сказал "А", так давай дальше по алфавиту... Smile
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